Monday, 2 January 2012

One Hundred Word Challenge for Grown Ups Week #25


Our prompt this week is:
to write as the arrowed Santa.


     A night with the Girls.

Bao Yu said it would be fun.
She said it was a multicultural opportunity.  Costumes were to be provided by the organisers. 
Look at me! I look ridiculous.
Mother said I would grow out of my baby panda fat. Well I haven’t yet.
My t-shirt does not look nearly as good as the rest.
The hat! What’s with the red and the fluff? It itches; it makes my face look fat.
That food,  that Christmas Pudding.
I want to go home. 
Thank goodness I’ll be back home soon, only two more days of this madness...

12 comments:

  1. Oh well, you never know unless you try. And you really don't look any worse than all the others dear. :) Nice one Theotheralig.

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  2. Good one Alison. You've certainly captured her angst.
    Happy new year :O)

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  3. I feel so sorry for her. Well done.

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  4. Don't worry, it'll all be forgotten in the morning (so long as there weren't any pictures...).

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  5. I guess we're all hard on ourselves, even when no one else really notices things we think are obvious. This captures that state of mind.

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  6. She looks like she's thinking ALL those things! Well done!

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  7. well done - she really does look like she could be thinking all those things you wrote -and we are so often very self-critical. I love what midlife singlemum said in her comment - ditto! :-D

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  8. Ah, the perils of being the one that really doesn't want to be there. Maybe we've all felt like that and so we are really good at putting it into words!

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  9. I like this take, especially giving her posture and stance. Can easily imagine her thinking all these things.

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  10. You've built her personality very well - and one that most of us can identify with!

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  11. What a great portrait you've painted here A! I know how she feels with some of those thoughts!

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  12. love the line "baby panda fat" - how cute!

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